Opinions Wanted!
My latest project is a contemporary romance. The MCs are Cherry and Ben. I originally intended to write this in 3rd person, but I'm not feeling it. Which isn't unusual for me. It seems I need to get a few chapters in before I find the flow. The conundrum here is whether to stick with my original plan, or maybe go with a dual POV, giving both my guys some star time. So, opening page here written both ways. Opinions are very much wanted! Thanks 3 rd person: The roar of the motorcycle shattered the peace of the evening, and Cherry imagined that the sunset’s reflection in the small lake rippled with the vibrations. He glared as the intruder flipped the kickstand down and swung his leg over the seat, but his icy gaze thawed slightly as the man pulled off his jacket to reveal tight black jeans that displayed trim hips and a nice ass. Cherry’s resentment at the interruption evaporated completely as the man removed his helmet and shook out his jaw-length black hair. Motorcycle-...