Rainbow Snippets*-- There And Back Again
(crossing Nebraska)
This week's snippet is taken from In From the Cold, the book I am slowly but steadily editing. Scoey is moving into The House and Headphones is unsettled by it:
Headphones shuffled through the drizzle and fog. On nights like this, the cold and dampness sank into her bones and even a scalding-hot shower wasn’t enough to warm her. Her family had moved several times over the years, following her dad’s jobs, but somehow always in southern towns, warmer and dryer. Old memories had been flooding in, as if finally being settled, static, had opened some gate that she’d thought was locked tight. They were bouncing around, flashes of people and places forgotten, and she was unwittingly dwelling on them. This latest mental upheaval was because of Scoey. He wasn’t him, but it was still there, in his clothes, his hair cut, his height. It was all so similar. She couldn’t even see the man’s face anymore, the blurred glimpse that had haunted her dreams. Now it was Scoey she saw in her nightmares. It came back in waves every time she was in the same room as him.
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Great description of unwanted memories and their trigger.
ReplyDeleteAww, I feel bad for them both, assuming Scoey doesn't deserve to be painted with the same brush as the guy he resembles. ❤️
ReplyDeleteI promise, Scoey is a good guy!
DeleteThe way the setting blends with memory is so visceral, poor Headphones...
ReplyDeleteHeadphones seems so locked in and cut off. Great job of making us feel for her! :)
ReplyDeleteHave a great day!
ReplyDeletePoor Headphones, that's a scary thing to have happen
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