Rainbow Snippets*-- Six Weeks, Give or Take
Like everyone else, I'm ready for winter to be done We have so few sunny days here in January and I need sun! It feels like everyone is in holding mode and energyless. On the upside, I finished what I hope is my last pass of edits on In From the Cold and am now working on Sunshine Smile. Because the first two books have cliffhanger endings I want to publish them all at the same time. I'd considered publishing it as one book, but that would make it 180K+ words. I think it works like this. (At least, I hope it does!)
(I'm ready for color!)
The second book in the series very much becomes Scoey and Jay's story. They weren't really meant to be the main characters, but once I started writing, they took over. It's also when I realized m/m was what I wanted to write. Their romance is a slow burn because Scoey is very confused about what is happening (he's demi-pan). But occasionally, he isn't confused at all:
They lay like
that, unmoving except for Scoey’s foot rubbing against Jay’s instep where their
feet were tangled, tongues and lips slowly tasting with no urgency, silent
exploration accented by sighed breaths through Jay’s nose and whimpered moans
that weren’t much more than vibrations deep in Scoey’s throat. Their first
kiss, if it could even be labeled as such, had been a quick
don’t-blink-or-you’ll-miss-it peck and meant as a joke. The one in the
storeroom had been spontaneous and desperate, leaving them both stunned in its
aftermath. And the one in the car, well, it didn’t count, considering Scoey
didn’t remember it. But this, well, this kiss was something warm and
extraordinary; a lazy drift of lips, a languid dueling of tongues creating a
haze of desire that misted through their veins.
*Rainbow Snippets is a (Facebook) group for LGBTQ+ authors, readers, and bloggers who gather once a week to share snippets from a work of fiction–-a WIP or a finished work or even a book recommendation. If you're interested in following a diverse group of authors, check it out here.
*Rainbow Snippets is a (Facebook) group for LGBTQ+ authors, readers, and bloggers who gather once a week to share snippets from a work of fiction–-a WIP or a finished work or even a book recommendation. If you're interested in following a diverse group of authors, check it out here.
Vivid, emotionally-driven descriptions that convey their passion! (heart)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful snippet. Very sensual. And I love the rationale that this was their first kiss.
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