Rainbow Snippets*-- Beyond Bleak
Bleak has been the word of the week. It's been cold and grey with rain, sleet, and snow flurries. It can end now! I feel like I'm in a holding pattern, waiting for nicer weather.
This week's snippet is part 2, again from Headphones: Sunshine Smile. In part 1, Jay catches Scoey watching him as he eats a banana, and so naturally he makes a production of it and it's too much for Scoey:
With a wicked grin, Jay pulled his lips back and made a show of biting into the fruit. He winked and swallowed before sending Scoey an air-kiss.
This week's snippet is part 2, again from Headphones: Sunshine Smile. In part 1, Jay catches Scoey watching him as he eats a banana, and so naturally he makes a production of it and it's too much for Scoey:
With a wicked grin, Jay pulled his lips back and made a show of biting into the fruit. He winked and swallowed before sending Scoey an air-kiss.
Scoey was
transfixed by the movement of Jay’s lips and jaw. Flashbacks of kissing Jay
trapped his mind and his skin itched as he broke out in a sudden sweat. The
taste of him, as if it had happened only moments before, was still fresh in his
memory. His throat tightened and his stomach fluttered. It was too much and he
fought his paralysis, willing his arms and legs to move. A stool skidded,
almost tipping, when he knocked against it in his haste to get out of the room.
Everyone grew
quiet as they watched, puzzled by his erratic behavior. They’d all been so
focused on what Mick was saying that none saw the subtle exchange happening
between Scoey and Jay, but Richard heard the keyboardist’s quiet chortle. He
didn’t know what was going on between the two, but he feared an uncomfortable
talk with the boy might become necessary if he kept it up.
*Rainbow Snippets is a (Facebook) group for LGBTQ+ authors, readers, and bloggers who gather once a week to share snippets from a work of fiction–-a WIP or a finished work or even a book recommendation. If you're interested in following a diverse group of authors, check it out here.
*Rainbow Snippets is a (Facebook) group for LGBTQ+ authors, readers, and bloggers who gather once a week to share snippets from a work of fiction–-a WIP or a finished work or even a book recommendation. If you're interested in following a diverse group of authors, check it out here.
Poor Scoey!
ReplyDeleteSuch vivid description, drawing the reader into the experience! (heart)
ReplyDeleteLoved the visceral description of the flashback
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