Beta Request: Blind Ante

 I'm looking for beta readers for the first book of my Bar Games series. 

Blind Ante—53K, gay/bi, relationships with other people on page before the MCs get together, which happens later in the book. Some light BDSM, mentions of parental abuse. 

Jordan Hatfill grins as he lays his cards on the table. Full house against a trio of Aces. The deed he wins may be worthless, but Jordan’s tired of living in his car, moving from town to town in search of the next poker table. The trailer is old and rusty, but the plumbing works and the roof doesn’t leak. For the first time ever, he feels like he’s found a home. 

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All Reece Daniels wants after a day of traveling is a quick shower and a good night’s sleep. Instead, he’s fighting off the advances of an old girlfriend while he verbally spars with the man he’s found in his bed. He doubts the legality of the deed his brother wagered and lost, but takes pity on the too thin, very lost young man, and offers to rent him the extra bedroom. 

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Jordan is happy for the first time he can remember, but this fragile arrangement is shaken when his on-again, off-again lover walks back into his—and Reese’s—life. Reese and his trailer have become everything to Jordan, but will his past destroy the life he's begun to build? 

This is a second round of beta reads. I made suggested changes from round one and now I'm looking for basic feedback: character development and story flow. Contact me at sadiejaywrites@gmail.com or FB Messenger if you are interested or have questions.