Rainbow Snippets*-- Happy V-Day!
This week's snippet is a continuation from last week and is taken from the prologue from Smoke and Sparks, told from Daryl's POV. He has just discovered his cousin Ben is bisexual and he is beginning to accept that he, himself, is gay. (part 5 of 6-- read part one here, part two here, part three here, and part four here.)
Cherry was a flame that drew me, and after my fourth beer, I got brave enough to sit next to him as the group settled around the campfire. It was midsummer and hot, and still, we’d built a fire and gathered around as if it was some prehistoric instinct, to keep close in case a sabertooth tiger was stalking us, watching from the darkness.
Or maybe, as humans, we just like to watch the flames and listen to the crackle. Herd instinct sounded better than drunken fascination. Either way, we gathered, we drank, we told stories, and we laughed. And I asked Cherry some really stupid questions. I don’t even know where they came from. And although Cherry seemed amused, I upset Ben. And yes, in retrospect, I went too far when I asked which of the two was the man in their relationship. But I really wanted to know how it all worked.
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Beautiful snippet!
ReplyDeleteLove the reflections about the fire, and the inner monologue. I do hope that the others -- especially Ben and Cherry -- put it down to too much booze.
ReplyDeleteThis is lovely
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